Louise always gives me detailed feedback. She has a knack for giving enough information about the changes she suggests, so I can make the changes knowing what I’m doing and why without feeling overwhelmed.

Louise’s edit put words to the main issues I was having, and clarified what I was missing. The main issue was two intersecting plots that, when entwined, confused and separated the reader from the message of the novel. Louise allowed this severe error to surface, and drowned it again so that the waters would always be clear.

Louise doesn’t just suggest changes; she also makes me understand how to apply them, and why they are necessary, so when I write next time I can take this advice into account and avoid mistakes or flaws in my writing.