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Good world building makes a fictional world feel real and lived in. If the world building can fall apart when a reader starts asking questions like “Why don’t they just band together to overthrow the dictator?” and “Why is this character living in poverty when they can do magic?”, the world does not feel real and lived in, it feels fragile and shallow.
One of the keys to writing a great story is great character development. Since stories are driven by the characters they’re about, when characters are poorly developed, a story can quickly become boring, confusing, meandering and pointless. Stories like this […]
Jar Jar Binks …. pod racing … there are a lot of reasons to not watch this movie, but is there anything it can teach us about storytelling? 1. Every character needs a role People hate Jar Jar Binks. That’s […]
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Louise’s edit put words to the main issues I was having, and clarified what I was missing. The main issue was two intersecting plots that, when entwined, confused and separated the reader from the message of the novel. Louise allowed this severe error to surface, and drowned it again so that the waters would always be clear.
Louise doesn’t just suggest changes; she also makes me understand how to apply them, and why they are necessary, so when I write next time I can take this advice into account and avoid mistakes or flaws in my writing.
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